Michael's 'Deep Thoughts'

Poetry rants sermons and essays by a Friend learning to live with Jesus

Counting money (a sonnet)

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Work ends, the paymaster gives what is owed
The worker is left to count his money
Mail comes from the bank that I must decode
Bills come together: today is rainy
Seems there is never quite enough in there
The taxman takes his cut before I do
Everyone wants to take, God, is this fair?
Something left for me is long-overdue
Counting does not make the bank account grow
Counting does not make the creditors leave
It only tells us to sacrifice so
Next month we can spend less than we receive
When I count I see that I will survive
With care, I think that I will even thrive

Written by michaeldavidjay

© October 8, 2008 at 3:17 am

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  1. I like this. I hope you thrive too. My husband and I almost took a trip to your town today–we didn’t have time to follow through.
    Take Care.

    Carolina Maine

    © October 9, 2008 at 1:18 am

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