Michael's 'Deep Thoughts'

Poetry rants sermons and essays by a Friend learning to live with Jesus

Dark and lonely poem

with 5 comments

When the darkness comes
I must wait it out alone
For the road that I’ve chosen
Is one that no one will follow

It is a darkness filled with silence
Unbroken for what seems like eternity
It is a night that never breaks
Awaiting a dawn that may never come

I have no strength for this road
And the ones that I depend on dare not follow
Any screams I shall make
Will be swallowed up and heard by no one
For the darkness is truly vast

Here all joy is sucked out
And replaced with grief
Companionship is removed
And the world is filled with loneliness

Yet I must be strong
Finding life and light
Beyond myself and this world
I must find the One who can be with me
And I can depend on for all things

His strength shall become my own
And through His power
We shall overcome

Written by michaeldavidjay

© January 22, 1996 at 3:59 am

5 Responses

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  1. A friend of mine, noticed that this poem is my ‘most popular.’ I told checked, and found that it was because people were searching Google for lonely poems. I wrote the following, to give him a little laugh. Anyone searching for loneliness here is invited to read.

    http://michaeldavidjay.wordpress.com/2008/05/16/searching-for-loneliness/

    michaeldavidjay

    © May 21, 2008 at 8:59 pm

  2. [...] Friend’s Angst-Filled Poetry A friend of mine once wrote, A dark and lonely poem. All about being alone in the dark. Insomnia can do that, Inspire someone to write a poem In the [...]

  3. I’m not searching for loneliness, but I really love the tone of this poem, reminds me of some of my own, but you do it so well. I cannot count the number of times that I’ve read this.
    “And through His power / We shall overcome.”

    bomi

    © June 1, 2009 at 2:31 pm

    • ah, you’ve been reading my older work — I am glad you liked it. I am flattered.

      michaeldavidjay

      © June 1, 2009 at 2:57 pm

  4. Sometimes lonely is the best friend we can have… its the only road left to us .. Life sucks .. and people whom u called friends my turn to be nothing.

    I enjoyed ur blog alot.

    hoope

    © July 14, 2009 at 8:16 pm


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